The city with walls
The city was shimmering when she looked down from the
lighthouse. The lighthouse was a sacred place, maintained by the city but yet
not open to the tourist. Neither had it been in the past. Only few had
keys to the lighthouse. The lighthouse was amply situated at the top of the entry gate boasting of the grandeur alongwith the mighty walls and glimmering outrageously because of its exclusivity.
“The city has a life of its own. It makes its own choices,
chooses its own people. It breathes in people it likes and spits out the rest", the view had her mesmerized. "There is something to be learnt from this. Who says the walls are bad? Maybe
keep population in check so help our country”, she said tapping the cigarette
butt after a long drag.
It was a cold night. And the air at that height must
already be thin. It was his last day. She may not have been ready to take over
but she was not going to miss out on any wise words coming from his trusted friend,
confidante and mentor.
The city had a medieval past which everyone knew about. It
was documented of course. But, nobody knew the form of existence it took before
that.
“Who would have built those wall?”, she was not aware but
she spoke aloud.
Som interrupted while cutting her trans short, “I like it
too to see how this city gets to live so many lives in one lifetime”. They
seemed to be in unison. But, he made a point for her to notice what he was
going to say next. “It is not a layman observation. Only few of us get to see
it as a whole. From outside. From up above here, you know.”
It felt like the right moment and he started to rummage around in
his loose kurta pockets to find a set of jangling keys. “These are yours now.
Know what to do with it?”, the symbolic baton had been passed on. She raised
her eyebrow and bent her cigarette against the edge of the roof to put it out.
The sigh exhaled every last soot from her lungs and from her heart.
“Did you still figure out why these walls were propped
up?”, he knew their conversation was nearing its end.
“To keep my ancestors
away from yours. ”, he put out his
cigarette and started to get up. He never attempted to make eye-contact with
her during this time. " Or so says the folklore around here", he eased out.
The confusion was smeared all across her face.
Discrimination had been the part of her life all along ; since her childhood.
How long was that going to continue? The mentor had gauged the shock in her
eyes.
“So now you know what these keys mean”, he tapped his mentee’s back gesturing
her to get up.
She took those keys and laid them out in her palm. City
was hers now. But she had work cut out for her. To get city to make her its
own.
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YeahWrite prompt: Write a poem set around a walled city or
write a chant (or combine the two).
My favorite parts of this story are when the writing goes into a poetic mode. For instance, "every last soot from her lungs" is a creative way to describe pollution while building strong imagery for the reader.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nathan, so glad you liked them !
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