You could have ... !
“How beautiful!. It’s like looking over a different
city!
“Thought this might change your plans and you’d
stay”, he said, chinned down.
“No, You
might have … ”, she stood up and jerked-away.
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This is my response to the Trifecta weekly challenge, which is to write a 33 to 333-word response using the above picture.
He apparently didn't understand her at all. Poor guy...
ReplyDeleteYes, if only he understood ... so much of 'if's'... Thanks for reading trudgingthorughfog :)
Deletegeographic undesirable to one another. When you are young and sometimes when you are old, where you live can trump all.
ReplyDeleteTure dat Ann ... Sometimes, that does become a constraint or a restraint ! :)
DeleteFantastic work! So many subtleties in so little words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Oscar... So glad you liked it :)
DeleteAwesome
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruby :)
DeleteAnd you are so kind with your words ... Thanks Jo-Anne :)
ReplyDeleteOuch, burn. He should have been more attentive!
ReplyDeleteSure that ! Thanks for reading Draug :)
Deleteover and end... poor guy
ReplyDeleteYes he may be ... !
DeleteYou capture the body language of the photo well :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Janna ... Glad you think so :)
DeleteNice: simple, subtle and effective. Clean writing, well done.
ReplyDeleteLaura
Hey ! Thanks for reading ... It is subtle, isn't it! Glad you liked it. :)
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