A drown in those eyes
The
light spray of the waters from the ocean, the freshness of the new air, nothing
made it easier. It was one of those questions she had always dreaded answering
and secretly wished she was able to take it to her graves or may be write in a
paper, tie it with a stone and throw it far, too far in the ocean never to be
discovered again. She was ready to be a coward for as long as it was safely guarded.
But,
there it was out in the air, and she, still not ready to accept the challenge.
She
stole a glance at him from the corner of her eyes and quickly stared at the
ocean. Even the arched gaze was enough to bring that unique satisfaction on her
face. Immersed in those liquid eyes, she lived it again.
Since
antiquity, she had been good at reading people and their nuanced
faces. She could easily make out the subtlety between altruism, and
hypocrisy. But, this was no same. Those eyes with so much brightness had a
trove full of mystery which she wanted to decrypt so badly before they drowned
her down inside with themselves and before she let them without any resistance.
Every time the transience in those eyes would seem to mouth an untold story of
his passion for her. But, his reticence to voice them would dupe her into
believing this could just be an illusion rippling away. And, she preferred it
that way because nothing more than those eyes could ever assuage her of
anything more. She felt the disaccord between his eyes and his mouth; she could
feel how the words would get lost in way while traversing from his eyes to his
mouth. She just wished she could preserve the innocence in those eyes when they
would tear-up when he saw a three-legged puppy or the apprehension that they
reflected when she would be distressed. And God! How he would deny all that
viscid event.
She
had fallen for those eyes long time back but had grown deft in hiding it for
almost as long.
She
was trudging through the mist of all those memories inside herself when he
snapped her out of her trance and reiterated “C’mon, unravel the mystery. Who’s
the lucky one?”, attempting to break the protracted silence.
She
twisted her jaws and pushed in some element of mystery to avoid the awkwardness
she had created inadvertently. “Be patient. You’ll know”, she paused
with a wink, trying to ease-off the pressure.
(P.S. – Why should boys have all the fun?
:P)
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This is my response to the WriteOnEdge challenge to use the picture from above alongwith the song LifeHouse - Halfway Gone.
Nice story, descriptive with a surprising ending.
ReplyDeleteThanks Beebee :)
DeleteI like the way you made the point of the fantasy being better than the reality. " And, she preferred it that way because nothing more than those eyes could ever assuage her of anything more." Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Renee ... Glad you liked it :)
DeleteWomen do tend to hold the fantasies dearer in their hearts than the realities. It's the only way the species has survived this long, I'm afraid. Lovely story--great descriptions of what she saw in his eyes.
ReplyDeleteThanks TMW ... So glad you liked my description. And, nice observation I must say. But you may be true in most circumstances, but there are few who'd better put it out there than to crib in their fantasies.
ReplyDeleteI think we all have things we would prefer to keep safe, rather than reveal, so this resonates very effectively from the beginning.
ReplyDeleteYea, better be safe than hurt, the talisman ! ... I just wonder how much one loses by not saying it out loud !
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