My SUPER-Man !
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This is my response to Trifecta’s weekend prompt:
This weekend we’re having some fun with the prompt, some super-powered fun, that is. We’re asking you to write the origin story to the superhero of your choice in exactly 33 words.
I was so confused who to write about. I had so many of those qualities in mind. But, I mentioned only the best I had liked. May look out of place, but 33 words were too cruel this time.
This is my SUPER-Man!
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Tormented
past, never complained.
Didn’t know
he could save then.
Thus the Growl.
Sketched the
tormentor
Like a Marionette.
Which he
then hung upside-down.
Never
uttered anything ill,
So words had
Midas touch.
33 words of bouncing poem ....trying to make sense but everything bounced .....
ReplyDeleteMadam kabhi common man ke liye bhi likh do !!!
Best Of Luck though ;-)
(hey that ryhmes ...well atleast in a sense)
hey Bhai, its funny 'Jahajee'!
Deleteyou could have said a bit about how my blog looks now. I tried some of your mantras. And, haha everything bounced. looks my words didnt come out well.
and I have given up on rhyme ... ab aap hi karaiye rhyme on my behalf !
As unusual as the concept. Liked it :-)
ReplyDelete... your comment is like a breeze after a tornado ... So glad you liked it yarnspinnerr :)
DeleteThat's a pretty tough dude.
ReplyDeleteyea he had his past teach him all he knew in the present ... like Phoenix rising from his own ashes maybe ... just kidding ... thanks for reading Ann :)
DeleteGrowls do appear to be common in superheroes these days. Good one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Joe :)
ReplyDeleteSomeone who overcomes adversity and still helps others is a pretty awesome hero :)
ReplyDeleteyes he is ... :) Thanks for reading Janna !
DeleteOh I like this one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Draug ! :D
DeleteLikeable
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :)
DeleteWhat a cool piece!Wonder who this Super hero is?
ReplyDeleteI still don't have a name for him ... Glad you like him too :)
DeleteNicely done Shreya!
ReplyDeleteSo glad you liked it Suzanne ... :)
DeleteSounds like a hero to me. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks for linking up! Please don't forget to come back to vote!
Thanks Trifecta for reading ... And yes, I wont forget voting :)
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