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My SUPER-Man !

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This is my response to Trifecta’s weekend prompt:
This weekend we’re having some fun with the prompt, some super-powered fun, that is. We’re asking you to write the origin story to the superhero of your choice in exactly 33 words.
I was so confused who to write about. I had so many of those qualities in mind. But, I mentioned only the best I had liked. May look out of place, but 33 words were too cruel this time. 
This is my SUPER-Man! 
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Tormented past, never complained.
Didn’t know he could save then.
Thus the Growl.
Sketched the tormentor
Like a Marionette.
Which he then hung upside-down.
Never uttered anything ill,
So words had Midas touch.
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  1. JAHAJEEMay 3, 2013 at 10:54 PM

    33 words of bouncing poem ....trying to make sense but everything bounced .....
    Madam kabhi common man ke liye bhi likh do !!!
    Best Of Luck though ;-)
    (hey that ryhmes ...well atleast in a sense)

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMay 3, 2013 at 11:35 PM

      hey Bhai, its funny 'Jahajee'!
      you could have said a bit about how my blog looks now. I tried some of your mantras. And, haha everything bounced. looks my words didnt come out well.
      and I have given up on rhyme ... ab aap hi karaiye rhyme on my behalf !

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  2. AnonymousMay 4, 2013 at 8:52 PM

    As unusual as the concept. Liked it :-)

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMay 5, 2013 at 1:52 PM

      ... your comment is like a breeze after a tornado ... So glad you liked it yarnspinnerr :)

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  3. Ann BennettMay 5, 2013 at 6:33 AM

    That's a pretty tough dude.

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMay 5, 2013 at 1:55 PM

      yea he had his past teach him all he knew in the present ... like Phoenix rising from his own ashes maybe ... just kidding ... thanks for reading Ann :)

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  4. AnonymousMay 5, 2013 at 2:21 PM

    Growls do appear to be common in superheroes these days. Good one!

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  5. ShreyaKashyapMay 5, 2013 at 3:58 PM

    Thanks Joe :)

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  6. AnonymousMay 5, 2013 at 8:45 PM

    Someone who overcomes adversity and still helps others is a pretty awesome hero :)

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  7. DraugMay 6, 2013 at 12:43 AM

    Oh I like this one!

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  8. brudbergMay 6, 2013 at 1:49 AM

    Likeable

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  9. AtreyeeMay 6, 2013 at 2:36 AM

    What a cool piece!Wonder who this Super hero is?

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMay 6, 2013 at 11:29 AM

      I still don't have a name for him ... Glad you like him too :)

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  10. SuzanneMay 6, 2013 at 5:25 AM

    Nicely done Shreya!

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  11. TrifectaMay 6, 2013 at 6:30 AM

    Sounds like a hero to me. Well done!

    Thanks for linking up! Please don't forget to come back to vote!

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMay 6, 2013 at 11:31 AM

      Thanks Trifecta for reading ... And yes, I wont forget voting :)

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