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Moving On ! - Episode 5

Something happened or did someone snap their finger in front of him, he suddenly woke out of it.  A sense of despondence had flourished across his face. His face changed color, a mix of red and blue at the same time. He was embarrassed; the embarrassment evident in his eyes. Vidya could sense his vain attempt to cover the damage; he could have bore his soul a little less to her but it just struck her, he was adorable. He thought he had gotten used to the fact that the story that he has been narrating for the past one hour was now just a story, getting further from reality with every passing moment. But, the urge to want to continue living it was making it difficult for him to believe that he now had to keep them all ensconced somewhere and move on. But au contraire, he let her have a glimpse of it.  Even then he was contented inside. He trusted her. It was a load shed!


Check out the previous episode here:
Episode 4
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  1. DraugApril 18, 2013 at 6:59 AM

    It's good that he got that off his chest!

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  2. AnonymousApril 18, 2013 at 11:28 PM

    Trust can take a burden off. I hope she is deserving of his trust!

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  3. TrifectaApril 19, 2013 at 10:27 AM

    A relationship is nothing without trust. What relief he must feel.

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