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Let's not give up!

I could lead the charge and get us through it.
I might as well wait for a century.  
But, what you think is lost,
I want you to know
Was more air than I ever had 
To breathe. 

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Link to Trifecta Homepage: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/ 

This is my response to Trifecta's weekend challenge, which was to write 36 words which includes the words "charge," "century," and "lost."  Have a great weekend!

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  1. Valerie BoersmaApril 21, 2013 at 2:08 AM

    I love this! It is so meaningful and thought provoking!

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  2. DraugApril 21, 2013 at 6:24 AM

    Very cool. Great job!

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  3. Whispering ThoughtsApril 21, 2013 at 8:22 AM

    So beautifully written

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    1. ShreyaKashyapApril 22, 2013 at 3:05 AM

      So glad you liked it Ruby. Thanks for reading :)

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  4. Ann BennettApril 21, 2013 at 7:07 PM

    I read this yesterday and left the window open to read again. Really a sensitive, reflective statement. You hear about love unrequited, love ignited, but the stepping back and letting the unresponsive love to do their part is a great reflection. I'm impressed you said so much in so little words.

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    1. ShreyaKashyapApril 22, 2013 at 3:05 AM

      Aw, what a nice complement from you Ann ... Made my day :)

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  5. AnonymousApril 22, 2013 at 1:36 AM

    Great one!

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  6. AnonymousApril 22, 2013 at 10:06 AM

    This was beautiful. The line about "more air than I ever had to breathe" was perfect.

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  7. ShreyaKashyapApril 22, 2013 at 3:30 PM

    Thanks Janna for the nice comment :)

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  8. kymmApril 22, 2013 at 3:52 PM

    more air than I ever had to breathe
    Excellent.

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  9. ShreyaKashyapApril 24, 2013 at 1:25 PM

    Thanks Kymmm :)

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