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Trifecta : Rebellion

It was raining that day, I remember vividly. I had finally mustered up the courage because I knew the rain would have shaved-off every bit of it happening. It’s raining again, is it time for a new rebellion? 


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  1. AnonymousMarch 23, 2013 at 2:56 AM

    So much unsaid. I really like the question in the last line.

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMarch 23, 2013 at 12:58 PM

      So much more to say ... Glad you liked it ! Thanks for reading ! :)

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  2. barbaraMarch 23, 2013 at 4:21 AM

    memories are always so vivid. Nicely done.

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMarch 23, 2013 at 1:11 PM

      Yes lost memories always find their way out ... Thanks for reading (:

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  3. ReneeMarch 23, 2013 at 4:26 AM

    Ooh, what kind of rebellion? Almost sounds fun. Good read!

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMarch 23, 2013 at 1:25 PM

      Yea, may be now I should minor-detail it :) ... Thanks for stopping by and keep reading !

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  4. euan williamsonMarch 23, 2013 at 3:54 PM

    Yes, time for a new one! Nice! (switching off captcha is easier on readers!)

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  5. Vanessa Victoria KilmerMarch 24, 2013 at 12:46 AM

    Rain as a harbinger of rebellion? I like that.

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  6. UnknownMarch 24, 2013 at 1:33 AM

    Combine rain and rebellion and you can imagine so much! Your imagination is quite unique. And this Trifecta writing challenge looks really good!

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  7. sandra tylerMarch 24, 2013 at 2:35 AM

    weighted!

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  8. DraugMarch 24, 2013 at 7:27 PM

    Loving the open question at the end. I say go for it!

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  9. Ann BennettMarch 24, 2013 at 9:47 PM

    I'm curious about the rebellion. Much mischief afloat.

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  10. Sini RachelMarch 24, 2013 at 10:49 PM

    That was a rambling on remembering rainy rebellions....:-)

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  11. kymmMarch 24, 2013 at 11:06 PM

    It's always time for a new rebellion!

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  12. AtreyeeMarch 25, 2013 at 2:01 AM

    A new rebellion ?Interesting to know if it would be any different from the one the narrator is remembering or similar one?Loved this intriguing piece with unanswered questions:-)

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  13. UnknownMarch 25, 2013 at 5:15 PM

    I like this one a lot - Rain and weather bringing out discontent.

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