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Trifecta : Lucky, don't know! - Episode 1

Her phone started ringing. It said,” Vishal calling”. A moment ago, she was almost mumbling to herself cursing him to stand her up again.  But, seeing his name flash, the first thing she said once she had her phone-mic near her mouth were, “Vishal, are you okay? Where are you?” The voice on the other side said, “Hi! I am not Vishal. It looks like Vishal is down on the ground, puking and is out of his senses. He had your number on speed-dial and that’s how I called you".” “Where are you? Can you please … tell me… where is he... are you?”, her voice started breaking. The guy on the phone said, “I am in Mid-town Bar, 500 meters south of the Hotel Trans-Scend on the BelAir Road.” And, within  seconds, she was out of the restaurant and inside her black sedan. She fed in the address into the GPS, and soon she was out of the parking lot and on the road making hasty turns. The road was clear, with almost no traffic, a surprise considering it was just a little late after 9. May be it was raining, or just late. The wilderness on the road had her delve into the memories from past of how they met. A lucky encounter… she might convince her heart, but she clearly knew she deserved more. 

Check the after story here:
Episode 2

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  1. tedstrutzMarch 29, 2013 at 3:00 AM

    Fabulous Cliffhanger! I'm waiting...

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMarch 29, 2013 at 3:06 PM

      Thanks for reading ... and the next episode is soon to be published :)

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  2. DraugMarch 29, 2013 at 7:19 AM

    Ooo a possibility of a rekindled love (:

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMarch 29, 2013 at 3:08 PM

      A little deviation ... ! You might like it ! Thanks for reading :)

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  3. AnonymousMarch 29, 2013 at 1:45 PM

    This could lead to so many places. I hope you continue the story along with the trifecta prompts. Never done that myself but Janna does that, must be difficult i guess, though

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMarch 29, 2013 at 3:09 PM

      Thanks for reading Habiba ... I do have a story to tell ... Just hoping Trifecta helps me along !

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  4. AtreyeeMarch 29, 2013 at 2:45 PM

    Oh,oh I hope this Vishal is not a rotten one!And that this call is genuine & not a ruse to get her into more trouble!Waiting breathlessly for the next part....

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    1. ShreyaKashyapMarch 29, 2013 at 3:12 PM

      yea definitely ... He's not rotten per se ...! Thanks for reading (: And stay tuned for the next bits ! ...

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