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He had dreams. Many of them! Everytime he’d fail he’d spawn few more. But he had jotted them all down so when he achieves his first he could say, “Life was worth it!”




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This is my submission for this weekend’s Trifextra challenge. We had to write exactly
33 of our own words inspired by the following quote from the book we could win in theWBN giveaway. Good luck!
“It’s the possibility of having a dream come true that makes life interesting.” ― Paulo Coelho, Alchemist

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  1. AnonymousApril 13, 2013 at 1:20 PM

    Archiving dreams - very novel idea. :-)

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  2. AtreyeeApril 13, 2013 at 1:59 PM

    Love the idea of continuing to dream & noting each down-just cos one (or many) did not come true,doesn't mean one should just give up -& I agree,what a great sense of achievement when one comes true!Wonderfully written:-)

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    1. ShreyaKashyapApril 14, 2013 at 1:13 PM

      Thanks Atreyee ... One shouldn't give up atleast should keep this in mind :)

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  3. SuzanneApril 13, 2013 at 5:50 PM

    Love the optimism in this! Great take on the prompt!

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    1. ShreyaKashyapApril 14, 2013 at 1:13 PM

      Glad you liked it ... Wanted it to be a mix of pessimisim and optimism and let the optimism rule ! Thanks for reading :)

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  4. DraugApril 13, 2013 at 9:50 PM

    A dream journal! :D haha, great piece!

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  5. AnonymousApril 14, 2013 at 3:22 AM

    hope it turns out to be a journal of 'I told you so's.'

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    1. ShreyaKashyapApril 14, 2013 at 1:20 PM

      once he actualizes his dream ... Thnks for reading ! :)

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  6. Marie NicoleApril 14, 2013 at 3:46 AM

    Once a dreamer... always a dreamer!

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  7. Whispering ThoughtsApril 14, 2013 at 9:18 AM

    Good one :)

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  8. barbaraApril 14, 2013 at 11:55 AM

    a dream journal! Great idea :)

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    1. ShreyaKashyapApril 14, 2013 at 1:18 PM

      Glad you approve Barbara ... Thanks for reading ! :)

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  9. Valerie BoersmaApril 15, 2013 at 2:18 AM

    I love the optimism too! Never give up-ever! The reward is too sweet! Great 33 words, Shreya!!

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    1. ShreyaKashyapApril 15, 2013 at 10:14 AM

      Glad you concur Valerie ... Thanks for reading ! (:

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  10. SandraApril 15, 2013 at 2:29 AM

    Wonderful optimism in this piece; if we fall, get right back up again!

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  11. allmylivesnowApril 15, 2013 at 4:55 AM

    A to-do list of dreams...I love it...

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  12. TrifectaApril 15, 2013 at 6:05 AM

    It's always worth it when you succeed!

    Thanks for linking up!

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  13. kymmApril 15, 2013 at 3:26 PM

    Love the fails spawning more dreams!

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  14. ShreyaKashyapApril 19, 2013 at 5:23 PM

    Thanks Kymm ... Glad you like it :)

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